The Desert Spear by Peter V. Brett is the
direct sequel to The Painted Man - the first volume of The Demon War
epic fantasy series. That tells you most of what you need to know. It is the nature of the
second book in a fantasy trilogy for it to be a bit of a struggle. The first book sets the
scene and develops the history and power of the characters. The third book conducts the
final battle against the great evil. But the second book is just a transition. The usual
form is to give the main characters some sort of intermediate evil to dispose of. Usually
at the end, the main character has gained some sort of special talisman or power that will
aid them in the third volume. There is another trick the author can use in the second
book. That is attempt to expand the universe of the series by adding new lands and
characters. That is the course Brett takes in this sequel. In the first book, three
characters and a very limited land are explored. The first third of The Desert Spear
is spend in another land building the history of another player in the drama. It is a big
risk, taking the action away from the earlier thread. Particularly when the first volume
was a powerful and gritty work. Sadly, this risk does not really come off. The story of
the desert warrior that opens this book is well told and brutal but it throws the balance
of the work out. By the time the focus returns to the original three characters, the
momentum is lost. As it becomes a multi-threaded tale, the book does not seem to flow
properly. Transitions happen at odd points in the tae. The book feels unbalanced
throughout.
In so many ways this is a pity. Brett has a real talent for telling an earthy and
compelling tale as he did with The Painted Man. His evocation of a world besieged
and just hanging on in the face of an onslaught by demons that rise out of the ground at
night is gripping. In the second book, the individual pieces of writing show at times that
he can keep you gripped. It is a pity that the structure of the book lets it down.
As a sequel, this book is only ever likely to appeal to those who have read the first
volume. Perhaps this is for the best, because it does not stand on its own merits. Fans of
the first book had best be prepared for a struggle while on their way to the third volume
climax to the tale.
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