Shadows Son is a bit of a
parsons egg. Caim is an assassin sent to kill a seemingly minor noble, only to find
the man dead before the deed is done. He is disturbed in his investigations of the corpse
by his putative victims daughter, Josey. But having a code, he doesnt kill
her. They are both interrupted by the local equivalent of the law, who have descended on
the house with the intention of killing both Caim and Josey. Caim, drawing on a power he
is not entirely comfortable using affects their escape and renders several of the
attackers hors de combat. It takes several close encounters with the
"law" for Josey to realise she is as much a target as Caim and cleave to him out
of necessity. I want to scream that this could have been better, for there are several
clichés in the story: an assassin with a code, the tart with a heart, sole surviving heir
to the throne. Mercifully they are not over-egged with other clichés, but still: they are
clichés. Caim has a power that he barely understands, and it frightens him when he does
use it. Unfortunately, this could have been explored better and more fully, but at least
it does not become a wonder weapon. There is also the waste of Caims invisible
friend, Kit. Whether she is truly real, or merely a manifestation of Caims power is
not fully resolved. But only Caim can see and hear her, and she does feed him useful
information. And like most female companions, she displays a fit of pique when Caim shows
more concern over his latest acquaintance than her.
What do help overcome the clichés are the two primary villains. One is a Machiavellian
prelate, intent on establishing a theocracy with himself as chief theocrat. The other is a
dark sorcerer, the private assassin of the prelate. While the latter is drawn more
sketchily than the former, they add a level of interest to the story and help transform
it. Naturally the story rolls to a climax with a showdown between the dark sorcerer and
Caim. Mercifully, Sprunk manages to stave off the seemingly inevitable "boy meets
girl, boy gets girl despite the circumstances" ending. I wait to see if Sprunks
storytelling has improved in the sequel, Shadows Lure.
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